The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm in awe of your talent. You tell an awesome story in a poem with great rhythm and unforced rhymes. Nicely done:)
06/09/11
Oh, I really enjoyed this wonderful narrative/fable poem –your land of narrow-minded outlook was expertly woven, imaginative, well written, visually and emotionally captivating - Kudos to your artistry!
06/12/11
Delightful tale told in excellent poetry! Good job! God bless!
Congratulations for placing 11th in Advanced!
I love the way your first line invites the child in me to imagine. And then as I go along I see so much symbolism cached inside: it is challenging to play detective and find them among the layers. Your poem puts me in mind of the poor people of Narnia turned to stone by the "White Witch." The Lord is truly inspiring your writing, Janice. Looking forward each week to see your next submission.