The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 327 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I like the way that you leave the ending open for the reader's imagination to unfold the rest of the story. Well done! Maybe more dialogue and less telling the story would have worked too but I still really enjoyed this one. My heart went out to both girls and I could feel both of their pain.
You did a nice job with this story. I loved the realistic characters, the conflict added just the right amount of tension and the ending was great.
06/11/11
Good story contrasting two different outlooks on life from best friends and the different paths those two outlooks took them on. I like the way you ended the story with forgiveness and with hope. Good read!