The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/11
What a brilliant poem and what a testimony! Fantastic word choices, scanning and rhymin. The whole poem is excellent, but the truth of the penultimate verse is staggering! The last verse is just wonderful - praise God for His transforming power! Thankyou.
Amen! Great meter and flow-thought provoking as how we can become arrogant and self reliant and often blinded. But God's light shines upon our deeds and praise God He shows us that our ways is not His. When our intentions and thoughts don't line up with His He patiently redirects us and shows grace towards us. God bless!! Nicely written.
06/15/11
Stunningly powerful and provocative! Loved your choice of words, filled with meaning.
Congratulations for placing 11th in Masters and 13 overall!
06/18/11
This poem had great metre and form. That it placed only 11th in the Master's category shows the depth of writing ability and talent displayed in the competition.

I try to read all your work, because you are so gifted.
06/22/11
This poem is excellent in every way. And the testimony is powerful and glorious! Thank God for the light of Christ that now shines from you. I agree with the lady that reads all your poetry because you are so gifted.