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06/14/11
I enjoyed this story from Ben and Israel's viewpoint. You've given it a new dimension. I was eagerly reading this familiar story to see what you did with the people and events. Great work!
06/14/11
Definitely interesting perspective! Had never thought of this story from this point of view. Clever.
06/18/11
Enjoyable, fast-paced reading. I liked the remark about Jacob's fasting. :)