The Official Writing Challenge
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wow. we were on really similar wavelengths weren't we. :)

I liked it. The one thing I'd offer is something I'm trying to pay more attention to- and that's specific details that help fill the story out. Like, instead of supermarket job- she slides into her car and clips her Snyder's Grocery name tag to her collar- or something like that- it's that extra picture painted for the reader.

I hope that makes sense. There were some minor formatting things but really minor.

a sweet story :) good job.
06/13/11
A very meaningful piece interestingly written. Thanks!
06/15/11
I personally got "soccer punched" by the verse. I needed to read this again today.
06/16/11
Great work - loved the note. Congratulations on your EC!
06/18/11
I have never read that verse in Habakkuk, but I'm sure going to write it down. The story was delightful and well written. Congratulations on your EC award.