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06/11/11
Good story and well written. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
06/11/11
What an engrossing read! I got totally caught up in her pondering and dilemma. I love how she describes the death of her parents as leaving her exposed, like the inside of a sandwich to heaven, because no family elders remains to pray for her, help guide. Well written! Enjoyed!
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award.
06/16/11
Congratulations Cheryl, well done!
06/21/11
Very well written and something that definitely hits a sore spot for many of us. I don't know if losing your parents is something you have gone thru recently, but I certainly have. Within a span of about 2 years my wife and I lost both her parents and the last one of mine. And we felt EXACTLY how you describe it here. I love the idea of your MC using this as instigation to begin a close examination of her own life and choices.