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This entry was aptly named. The doctor/patient conversation gave a real feel for the relationship between these kind-hearted men. I liked the ending because I didn't see it coming--guess I should have due to the title. Anyway, good job from start to finish with this one.
It was a great story and right on topic. I thought the dialgoue was excellent and conveyed the friendship between the two men. I didn't make the connection with the title and the end scene. I am gald that he chose to stay around longer.
Whew! God does indeed know what He is doing :-)

Great story and pace. Sometimes it's hard to squeeze two major scenes into such a limited word count, but you did it. Good job!
Outstanding storytelling. I love how well the title predicted the story.
This truly is a wonderfully told tale of love, family and faith. Excellent dialog, great pacing, just enough of the medical ambiance to set me on edge. The ending is superb. Great job.
What a lot of story to pack in. I love your characters and the concluding line. Well done.