The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/11
Wow! Spellbinding! Well written and thought provoking. Good bless!
06/11/11
WOW is right! Awesome futuristic tale! I love Si-Fi, I could see this as an episode on the twilight zone or something like that…though it more realistically depicts the tribulation period! Enjoyed!!
06/12/11
Ooh, cool! I'm working on a creation-based sci-fi series, so this was especially intriguing.

A little red ink: watch out for the 'was' word. Hard to do when you have so much story is so little space, but just thought I'd mention it.

Good job!
06/12/11
Awesome premise. Several of the more intense parts seemed a little less conflicted than I expected. Short sentences and strong verbs will make this story even more excellent.
06/13/11
An intriguing and interesting piece. I feel it would be difficult to obliterate christianity. Thinking about underground churches - China and others. Where things have been kept alive.
But I do believe there could be another purging of all that's Christian and a persecution as read in Sarah Elizabeth's piece this week.
06/13/11
Suspenseful story which is not too far from the truth. We are heading toward this very act in our country and the world. Our children's school books are being re-written with lies, the Bible is "outlawed" in the public schools, and more than a few "ministers" are leaving out or twisting the Gospel and other important sections of the Bible. Unless we Christians stand up and get involved, the Bible will become scarce and/or citizens will be penalized for owning, reading, and quoting it's precious words.
06/13/11
Cool story, fun read, well done.
06/13/11
Wow - intriguing! I'm not into sci-fi but this cleverly written piece kept me riveted. There were certainly some truths in there too.
06/17/11
Wow what a gripping story! Although I could tell where it was going I still found myself holding my breath and trying to read faster. Great job!

Congratulations for placing 13th in Advanced!