The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/11
What a beautiful, simple, heartfelt poem of gratitude. I love this.
06/10/11
Such simple but profound truths in this little poem! Loved it! God bless!
06/11/11
Lovely unforced rhyme, lovely rhythm, and an easy read. Well done.
06/11/11
Lovely little poem of truth and joy and praise! With its lyrical flow I could easily imagine this as a song. It left me with a sweet peaceful feeling! Enjoyed!
06/12/11
I love pieces like this where such depth is conveyed in such simple, concise words. Everyone is right, your flow is perfect! Great job!
So beautiful I could hear it set to music.

Congratulations for placing 12th in Advanced!