The Official Writing Challenge
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love the upbeat quick pacing of this charming story. It has both a breezy quality as well as a strong life message. Great work. (Oh, and glad to see Shiloh Church and Beanpunk Coffee House re-appearing.)
I liked this a lot. You went from obvious despair to wonderful hope and restoration.
The pace of this story kept me involved with your MC, hoping all would turn our "happily ever after." I love smiley endings that come about because God gets involved--thanks.
From rags to, well not riches but rich in the knowledge that God can restore and what once seemed hopeless is now full of His hope. I really enjoyed this piece. I can almost guess who wrote this but I'll have to wait and see if it's who I suppose.:) God bless your gift and creativity! :)
I loved how you compared a tornado to a person's tragedy. The story was engaging and well written.