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Topic: Outlook (06/02/11)
TITLE: Grandma can I tell you something?
By Phee Paradise
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Grandma, you know. We went to church before we went to the beach. We sang five songs. Iím five. See, five fingers, one two three four five. Mrs. Wilson said what do you want to sing. Tommy said Jesus loves me but I wanted to sing the walls song. Itís my favorite.
The walls came tumbling down, splat. Like that. You have to go splat, Grandma. I stamped my foot in a puddle and it went splat all over. We got a new sprinkler. It goes round and round like this. I got wet like a shower but not my head. I took a shower after dinner. You say supper but itís dinner. Iím hungry. I want a snack.
Grandma, may I, can you please give me a snack? I want a peach. Peaches are yummy. Tommy doesnít like peaches, he says they stink and have poop inside. giggle Heís silly. He thinks peaches are poopy. giggle Peaches donít have poop in them. Peaches are yummy. Theyíre my favorite. Mommy made waffles for breakfast. Daddy put strawberries and whipped cream on them. When I open my mouth Daddy squirts whipped cream in it. Mommy says stop but Daddy laughs. Strawberries are my favorite. S starts with strawberry. Sss sounds like S just like Sammy. Sss. Sammy.
Please can I, may I have a drink? Can I have the green cup? Green is my favorite but Tommy likes blue. Kamiís bucket is blue but she took my bucket. I hid the shovel for a buried treasure but Kami found it and wouldnít give it back. Her mommy said Kami tell Sammy youíre sorry. Mrs. Wilson says I have to tell Jesus Iím sorry when I make bad choices. Hitting Tommy is a bad choice.
I hit him Ďcause he took my green crayon. Mrs. Wilson took it away but I had to sit in the time out corner. Mrs. Wilson says Jesus is sad I hit Tommy. I told Jesus Iím sorry and I told Tommy Iím sorry but donít take my crayons.
Mrs. Wilson says Jesus loves me. Heís my favorite.
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