The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story told from a little boy's perspective. Adorable. God bless!
You have captured the outlook and voice of a little boy very well! I can almost feel the little wheels turning in that little mind as you allow us to look through his eyes! Good Job!
As someone who has worked in children's ministry for more than 10 years I can absolutely tell you that you captured the mind of a little boy perfectly!

This had me laughing out loud! Great job!
This is a very sweet story from a great POV. The only reddish ink I might offer is that in the formatting, there are words italicized, and I was trying to figure out why they were- unless that's just the emphasis the MC was putting on the words. It was a tiny bit distracting, but just a tiny bit.

Also, I find when I'm in a kid's head, even though more is more when you're in a kid's head-- when you're a grown-up reading it, you still need a pinch less. So if it were me, I'd slim it down a little.

But those are really minor things. I think you did a great job.
Totally credible POV, though I found the lack of punctuation making it slightly harder to follow.
Oh I love this! What a delight it was to read!
Congratulations for placing 10th in advanced and 29 overall!