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I really liked this-- had that kind of "road less traveled" feel in the sense that it's common to many, but still true and profound (often in life we have a choice between two paths, do we go the common route or go down the one less trodden? often in life we have the opportunity to see the grass greener on the other side of the fence or we can revel in the blessings & views that surround us.)

good work :)
06/12/11
I enjoyed so much about this poem: the word choice, the excellent descriptions, the rhyme and rythm and the message. Very good.
Oh this is so beautiful and within just a short piece it gives us an important message. Your rhythm and meter was right on. Frequently we need to come away from the hustle and bustle of a demanding and materialistic world and spend time with the Lord. He refreshes us and shows us what is true and necessary. I choose-"the view." Amen! Well done!