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06/09/11
Great story! I could picture myself there...although I wouldn't want to be there, as a poacher or a guard. :) God bless!
Well-written story which kept my interest from the first paragraph to the last.
Nicely written! I felt as if I was there trying to be quiet and find those heartless poachers. Good job! I was drawn in by your detail and the scenes you set. I'd like to see this in an actual book or even on film. I can visualize this and the environment painted in your story was vivid in my mind.
06/11/11
Great writing and very visual views - the topic, protecting our wildlife is one dear to my heart too!
Enjoyed this read, well done!
06/12/11
Very well written and a fascinating and dramatic plot. Combined with the good characters you've created this is a great read that I'd like to see more of.

Thanks!
unusual topic and well rendered. I kept wondering what inspired this story.
06/13/11
And chapter two goes ....?
Love your descriptions and the atmosphere you convey throughn your writing.
06/17/11
Suspenseful and very entertaining. Good job