The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/11
Interesting character sketches! This needs a bit more of a personal touch to help the reader relate. Perhaps it would have helped to have shown the story of one of the mothers. Your message is strong. Keep writing.
06/07/11
Oh how our opinions and views can change. :) This cleverly woven story had a ring of truth to it (and was perfect for "sellout!")