The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed this! Not by our strength, but by HIS, Jesus gives us the strength to do the right thing!!
Absolutely loved this story! Just a suggestion - put a space between paragraphs, it makes for easier reading. Keep up the good work though! God bless!
Powerful material whose effect is weakened by crowded paragraphs.
Great feeling and reflection in here, however.
This is a great story, I felt like I was right there ~
I enjoyed this. The MC is believable and you kept my interest. Good tension throughout the story. You have excellent story telling skills.
I was there Trudie, great job! really enjoyed this.