The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Enjoyed this! Not by our strength, but by HIS, Jesus gives us the strength to do the right thing!!
06/03/11
Absolutely loved this story! Just a suggestion - put a space between paragraphs, it makes for easier reading. Keep up the good work though! God bless!
06/06/11
Powerful material whose effect is weakened by crowded paragraphs.
Great feeling and reflection in here, however.
This is a great story, I felt like I was right there ~
I enjoyed this. The MC is believable and you kept my interest. Good tension throughout the story. You have excellent story telling skills.
06/13/11
I was there Trudie, great job! really enjoyed this.