The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/11
I like the title and everything about this tender romance--and I'm believing that Duke chose home-maker Doris for his wife. The train station wrap-up scene lets the reader choose the ending, which was a fun thing to do with this entry.
06/07/11
I like open endings. You have some great character sketches in this. Good writing!
06/09/11
I want to know! Great story. Congratulations on your EC.
06/09/11
Great story! I appreciate the fact that you didn’t “sellout” by giving us the end of the story (although, of course, I kind of wish you had). I loved the voice. Well done!
06/09/11
What a great story! Well done!
06/09/11
I loved this romantic piece. The MC's were charming. I liked the premise about men and feelings.

Congratulations on your EC award.