The Official Writing Challenge
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What an interesting perspective on a familiar story! I didn't understand all the hiccuping and gastric statements. Also, I was confused for a moment about the audience. Perhaps an earlier hint that it was a play might have helped. I like the creative perspective. Keep writing.
I have to admit that I, too, had trouble understanding the hiccup and gastric clues, if that's what they were! The story intrigued me, and perplexed me, and kept me reading.