The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/11
Good story and well written. Reminds of a book I read years ago 'Brother Andrew God's Smuggler'. Years ago when China was closed to the gospel, my son-in-law smuggled bibles in packed in cans of coffee. He had many stories to tell like this. God bless!
06/06/11
Very well written, in its depth and credibility.
06/06/11
Nice story, I have been in a similar place before. God comes through when we are doing his work eh.

Well written, kept me reading.

Cheers Kel
I figured where this was heading, but it is well written enough to hold my attention to the riveting end. Great job.
Nice job. I found myself holding my breath and I didn't see the ending coming.
06/13/11
Great job Joe, I didn't expect it, thanks so much for this!
Well done! The flow of the story, tension and suspense, as well as the surprise ending grabbed my attention and left me wanting to read more. You need to make this into a novel or even a short story.I enjoyed this piece!