The Official Writing Challenge
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This feels like the beginning to a novel! I want to know what happens next in Danny, Dee-Dee and Merle's lives. Wendi & Casey's too. I suspect it could be real life (or at least based on it) so I'll be praying for them. Whatever the case, you did an excellent job of portraying the lifestyle and inner musings. Love the title, by the way!

The opening line threw me a little, trying to figure out who actually said it. Also did you mean "sister's yapping" rather than "sisters yapping"? The latter had me expecting more sisters to be introduced.
06/03/11
I liked the easy flow in conversation and the message this story conveys--God changes lives. I found this very true to life in this ever changing world.
Well written story with believable characters and dialog. Well done, with a must read title.