The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Chilling all the way through and leaving the reader wrestling with the unspoken intent right to the end. Good writing.
06/07/11
*Wincing* so sad...because it is probably true somewhere today. Great writing.
06/25/11
A great reminder of what goes on in so many other countries. It reminds me in parts of Heavenly Man, although his descriptions were far more violent than yours.