The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/11
Oh Wow! *chilling* The repeated line with the hiss was eerie. Great writing!
06/07/11
Awesome descriptions! Sent chills down my spine. The repeated stanza is very effective.
06/09/11
I love it. I really admire the way you crafted this poem. It gripped me from beginning to end.
06/09/11
Brilliant! Congratulations!