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06/03/11
I admit I found this a fun, charming and heartwarming love story...
and probably should stop there...
but then I also have to admit the story left me pondering a “real" call on a person’s life to the mission field!

For I was left wondering if love or God swayed Peggy in the end in this story...
was all those years she believed God had a call on her life for Africa just her own wanting and a false call?
What was the real call and will of God on her life...being called at 9 years to Africa or called to China as an adult, by John?

For It seems to me that while quite believable mankind can and does change their plans and will, I have a harder time believing a real call/will from God on anyone's life would change.

But oh well, sorry, just me pondering out loud what may or not be a fictional story anyway! LOL
06/03/11
It's one thing to be stubborn about something, but another to be prepared to lay it down and check it is God's move.
06/06/11
That's one feisty lady that Peggy, and I wish John well. Though if he's prepared to crash a meeting with a proposal he may not exactly be a shrinking violet either!
A good fun read.
I'll say this for the story...it kept me going all the way to the end, to see what would happen. Now that's a good story!
Congratulations on your second place Level 3 win and eighth place EC wins. Impelling story.
06/09/11
Yeah congratulations, well done nice story. Cheers :-)
06/09/11
Congratulations Phee on placing 2nd. This story held my attention right through to the end. Well done.
06/09/11
Well done for your second placing.
06/13/11
Awesome work Phee! Very fun to read!