The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Wow, I really like this! I am sure if we intercepted communications from Hell, their battle plans would realistically sound much like this! But I LOVE your last line! LOL Good job!
Shades of "The Screwtape Letters." Very good. God bless you.
06/06/11
This also reminded me of the Screwtape letters, though updated to computerised communication. You've stuck to the key points that could very easily get lost in speculation, but brevity is your strength here. Well done.
06/07/11
Yeah 'Screwtape letters'. I enjoyed it. Fun, fun, fun.

Well done. Cheers
06/07/11
The concept of updating classical works to show how relevant they remain are at once a tribute to the original work, an exercise in creativity and a great way to communicate biblical concepts in fresh new ways. Well done.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended win!
06/13/11
Very creative Cheryl, I enjoyed this, congratulations!