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A tragic tale but nicely told. Would love to have seen a little hope peppered into this one, but I do like it.
06/06/11
This is such a sad tale. The truth is that there are too many war veterans out in the streets as homeless.
06/07/11
Having worked with people like this, I resonate with your pictures, for the tragedy is that so many of these worn-out people are aged well beyond their years.
06/07/11
Having worked with people like this, I resonate with your pictures, for the tragedy is that so many of these worn-out people are aged well beyond their years.
You managed to say so much and the flow seemed effortless.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in Masters and 11th overall!