The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/11
Very well written. I like the opening line, and especially like how you show that we can't buy our way into heaven, God's biggest and most magnificent display of all. Well done.
06/06/11
The cost was so dear to Jesus Christ. He paid a huge debt.
06/09/11
I love the concept, selling tickets to Godís glorious (and free) attractions. I wonder how many more of us would take the time to appreciate them if we actually had to pay to see them. Well written piece Ė I enjoyed it!
06/09/11
Very beautiful. I love your message and the elegant way you presented it. Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 13th overall.