The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Sad, riveting tale. Well written, nicely done. It will linger in my mind! God bless!
06/02/11
Powerful, visual, gripping even without the footnote…
the footnote then, adds another layer of chill to an already mournful tale.
I agree with Leola, a memorable piece!
06/05/11
Yeah I liked it too, kept me glued to the screen. Sad and sorrowful lovely piece.

Well done.

Cheers Kel
06/06/11
A very moving account of the forgotten people of our world. I love the poignancy of how you revealed who the beautiful daughter really was.
Wow what a powerful and an oh so sad story. I cant even imagine such a thing.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 3!
Oops I meant congratulations on ranking 7th not 8th!
06/13/11
sad and moving Danielle, great job on writing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sad pieces are not always the easiest for me, you did wonderful work!
WOW!! I mean, WOWWWWW! This is an amazing piece. I can't think of the right adjective...unique...powerful...gripping...WOW! Great job. :-)