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Sad, riveting tale. Well written, nicely done. It will linger in my mind! God bless!
Powerful, visual, gripping even without the footnote…
the footnote then, adds another layer of chill to an already mournful tale.
I agree with Leola, a memorable piece!
Yeah I liked it too, kept me glued to the screen. Sad and sorrowful lovely piece.

Well done.

Cheers Kel
A very moving account of the forgotten people of our world. I love the poignancy of how you revealed who the beautiful daughter really was.
Wow what a powerful and an oh so sad story. I cant even imagine such a thing.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 3!
Oops I meant congratulations on ranking 7th not 8th!
sad and moving Danielle, great job on writing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sad pieces are not always the easiest for me, you did wonderful work!
WOW!! I mean, WOWWWWW! This is an amazing piece. I can't think of the right adjective...unique...powerful...gripping...WOW! Great job. :-)