The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/11
Congratulations on your summary of the effects of tragic compromise through expediency. I saw a great parallel of the sheep and goats parable of Matthew 25, yet your MC has been firstly a sheep and then a goat.
Your last line was a real zinger.
06/06/11
I so pray that the MC did come to see the light before he died. Unfortunately, it is sometimes difficult to listen to the voice of God, when the static of work is so loud.

Well written story. I liked the dimension of the MC's.