The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Clever re-telling of this old Testament tale. (KD Jesson= King David, Jessie's son?) I read 2 Samuel after this to compare notes.
Great descriptions, although I had to re-read the line about the men's black (long and curly) hearts. ;)
06/05/11
Great rewrite of the Bible story. It is true there is no honor among thieves.
06/06/11
Energetic and incisive updating of this gruesome story. Great job.