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05/26/11
Very creative take on the topic, with only a few hints about where it might be heading.
05/27/11
Intriguing take on the topic. Well written and captivating! God bless!
05/28/11
Imaginative story, entertaining read!
05/28/11
Fun read. You kept the "secret" until the end. Good job.
05/29/11
You did a great job setting the scene. It went off in a direction I did not anticipate. Her name should have given me a clue but reality is getting so mixed with fantasy these days -- good work on many levels.
05/29/11
An alien in amongst ordianary people...how extraordinary! Oh, wait, that's what we're supposed to be! :)

Good job with this imaginative piece. And a good job of looking at it from the alien's pov