The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
I liked this a lot. Made me smile from beginning to end. Clever take on the topic. Great presentation of characters.
05/27/11
The dialogue was fantastic. I felt their emotion and passion. Well written. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
05/28/11
You have captured the actions/reactions, wording expressions and dialog of two young men this age perfectly, so very believable!

In my mind, in the end, I was left with the hopeful feeling Ben would soon convince Corey to join him…but hey, I love happy endings! LOL. Sadly, they don’t all end that way.
05/28/11
Excellent, both in the message given and the style of writing. Well done.
05/28/11
Excellent writing. Thanks for the story.
05/30/11
Great dialogue. I enjoyed the story; it felt real. You have a nice flow and pace to your writing. Thank you!
05/31/11
Great last line! Good job on the whole piece.
06/01/11
Amen to what Robert just said.
06/02/11
Wow! This is a great story and a conversation that many college students hopefully have.

Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 3!