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I liked this a lot. Made me smile from beginning to end. Clever take on the topic. Great presentation of characters.
The dialogue was fantastic. I felt their emotion and passion. Well written. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
You have captured the actions/reactions, wording expressions and dialog of two young men this age perfectly, so very believable!

In my mind, in the end, I was left with the hopeful feeling Ben would soon convince Corey to join him…but hey, I love happy endings! LOL. Sadly, they don’t all end that way.
Excellent, both in the message given and the style of writing. Well done.
Excellent writing. Thanks for the story.
Great dialogue. I enjoyed the story; it felt real. You have a nice flow and pace to your writing. Thank you!
Great last line! Good job on the whole piece.
Amen to what Robert just said.
Wow! This is a great story and a conversation that many college students hopefully have.

Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 3!