The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Cute. I especially like, admire, am fond of, your talking Thesaurus.
05/27/11
This was so humorous and true. To think that someday kids might not even know what a book is or does.

I also really liked the thesaurus.

Fun, amusing, enjoyable! I liked your premise, that kids want things spoon-fed to them, and it was done in a clever way. Iím not sure, though, that you made a case for using reference books, since an online thesaurus is so much faster. Still, the piece was original, well written and a fun read! Well done.
05/31/11
A delightful, creative read! A winner!
06/02/11
Rolling on the floor funny. I especially loved the Thesaurus Congratulations on your EC.
06/03/11
Wow, A+++ on the creativity meter. This is excellent for the topic and just plain fun to read! Congrats, Allison.