The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/11
This is so heartbreakingly real and true. You have so graphically been able to portray the sadness of our times and some of the thoughts that are abounding, particularly in our young. But it comes with such a challenge - as your last verse staggeringly shows. Thankyou for this thought provoking poem.
06/01/11
Very descriptive of the present day society. Well done! Thank you.
Thank you for stating so eloquently what should be obvious to all of us, but for some reason is not. I liked the piece throughout. Well done! I thought it was especially strong at the end.
06/02/11
I love the boldness, and word choices and construction are fabulous. An eye-opening work of art.