The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/11
Fanciful! I had a hard time picturing what was going on but I loved the descriptions of this creature with the nasty attitude and his hapless sidekick. Now that I think of it, that is how dreams come down, isn't it? Disconnected pieces -- and that's who we are ... disconnected without our Savior. Brilliant!!
06/01/11
Good descriptions, but a bit hard to follow in places. Thank you.
06/02/11
A fun, high-velocity read! I enjoyed the narrator's gradual--though persistently suppressed--discoveries about his monstrous nature. I think his waking up at the end kind of defuses your exposure of what is true of us all though. Nice job, Nancy.
06/02/11
Ah, but was it only a dream, or is he experiencing a false sense of security prior to meeting Nathan out by the car?