The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful prose! Absolutely loved it! God bless!
I really enjoyed this poem, the progression of thoughts and images of the different ages and stages of life done in a lighthearted way. Enjoyed the way your wove in the word/words, out-land-dish in every stanza, in varied ways. Perfect title for your poem! Good job!
You've captured the process of maturing and the growth of faith in an amazing (and outlandish) way!
Fantastic! Almost makes me wish for eighty... almost! Thanks for sharing.
This is beautiful, although I must admit it took mea bit to get through my thick head that the numbers were an age. I loved the journey you took me on and the rhythm and rhyme seemed to flow effortlessly.

Congratulations for ranking 7th in level three!