The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Delightful prose! Absolutely loved it! God bless!
05/27/11
I really enjoyed this poem, the progression of thoughts and images of the different ages and stages of life done in a lighthearted way. Enjoyed the way your wove in the word/words, out-land-dish in every stanza, in varied ways. Perfect title for your poem! Good job!
05/29/11
You've captured the process of maturing and the growth of faith in an amazing (and outlandish) way!
05/31/11
Fantastic! Almost makes me wish for eighty... almost! Thanks for sharing.
This is beautiful, although I must admit it took mea bit to get through my thick head that the numbers were an age. I loved the journey you took me on and the rhythm and rhyme seemed to flow effortlessly.

Congratulations for ranking 7th in level three!