The Official Writing Challenge
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I know "WOW" is getting to be overused but I'm sitting here saying it repeatedly. How did you pack so much into 750 words? Excellent job, just excellent! Great way to bring out the information on Make Way Partners. (Loved that this story is a sequel too.)
I really enjoyed processing the events that led up to the MC's decision and how she transitions from loving her husband exclusively to loving Jesus. Great job!
Great narrative and profile of the emotion and reflection as your MC rises through personal grief and into ministry for others who suffer. A step by step outline of God proving the truth of 2 Thess 1: 3-5, where God comforts us in our pain, so he may extand that same comfort through us to others in their pain.
Reminds me of that quote: "The will of God will never lead you where His grace cannot keep you.". Well done!