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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Outlandish (05/19/11)

TITLE: It Came From Outer Space
By Sydney Avey
05/22/11


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hes over the moon
hes over the top
hes stratospheric
he just wont stop

unearthly, mysterious
hes from off, hes far out
hes long expected
he comes with a shout

no eye has see
no ear has heard
no heart imagined
the might of The Word

stealthy among us
he drops from above
way past amazing
his outlandish love

all things we believe
in all things we hope
all things we endure
with all things we cope

for sake of The Word
who disarms the able
a fantastic display
he brings to the table

he zaps to extinction
all evil intent
transforms to goodness
what was hell-bent

no loathsome deed
escapes his attack
all good he reveals
grabs and gives back

down from the heavens
he zooms like a bird
hes the Son, the last Adam
the true Living Word

heed not and you enter
the realm of depraved
touch his cross, see his glory
by his grace, you are saved!

References: For the Kingdom of God does not consist in talk but in power 1 Corinthians 4:20
Also 1 Corinthians 1:27-29, 2:9, 3:13


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Bonnie Bowden05/29/11
Jesus's love is outlandish, beyond anything we can imagine.
Noel Mitaxa 05/30/11
I like how you have shifted from a potential alien theme to the reality of God revealing himself right in our midst. Very well done.
Cheryl von Drehle05/31/11
I love the energy of this poem, and the way you weave scripture phrases into modern super hero lingo.