The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/11
It is so sad that some in our society treat anyone who is different from them with such disdain. Many of these same people never even have met them.

I'm glad your poem paints such a picture of love.
05/30/11
"treating the world as a zoo" presents a very strong picture of rebuke. Very thought-provoking entry.
05/31/11
We hurt so many with our words and stares for many different reasons. Wish we could remember, "Do unto others..."
06/02/11
I love your way of telling a hurtful attitude. It's such a beautiful metaphor. Congratulations.
This is excellent. Such anger – the last lines especially are perfect, inspired. Well done, start to finish.
06/03/11
Congrats, Benjamin. Just excellent work!