The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem like the renewed sachet emits a sweet fragrance to all who read. I love the way you build with each line your symbolic progression. This one is perhaps my favorite "dropped out at my feet." It brought to mind the women found so often at Jesus' feet and how His words and presence refresh and make new. Thank you for reminding me with our Lord we don't have to be permanent drop outs.
05/19/11
Powerful images and emotions quietly caress in this uplifting message poem, that is indeed as a sweet fragrance to the soul.
Very emotive. God bless you.
05/26/11
I absolutely love this beautifully crafted, uplifting poem. Truly inspired!
Rejoicing with you Janice on your winning Highly Commended in your Level 3. This poem is one I will come back to often to remind me Jesus can always restore us.