The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/11
What an interesting mini-play. Quite the cast of characters and a singular thread of humor throughout--quite a bit to fit into such a short piece of 750 words. Thanks for sharing!
05/27/11
Entertaining read. :) I liked the dad's straight-forward remark about living vicariously through his son. His speech resembled the way the Chinese are portrayed as speaking English, so when Hazael enters eating Chinese take-out I was wondering if there was a connection. Nice job of keeping the interactions engaging!