The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job at bringing out the character of Judas through contemplations. I also applaud your ability to convey the message of 'drop out' without using the words.
Truly engaging re-telling of a pivotal point in Biblical history. Your writing brought Judas to life as your POV unfolded for the reader.
A good re-telling of a Scripture story. well written and interesting. Thanks!
You have conveyed the dark and chilling thoughts of Judas very powerfully. The sadness and the horror of this time really stands out.
Congrats on your win! I just read this and love it-sad horrifying account of a once dedicated disciple turned away towards darkness. Very full of feeling and description.
You seem to have captured the essence of Judas so well. I could see it evoving in just that way. Congratulations!
Very nicely done. So glad I read this. Excellent writing.