The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/11
Excellent job at bringing out the character of Judas through contemplations. I also applaud your ability to convey the message of 'drop out' without using the words.
05/20/11
Truly engaging re-telling of a pivotal point in Biblical history. Your writing brought Judas to life as your POV unfolded for the reader.
05/21/11
A good re-telling of a Scripture story. well written and interesting. Thanks!
05/25/11
You have conveyed the dark and chilling thoughts of Judas very powerfully. The sadness and the horror of this time really stands out.
Congrats on your win! I just read this and love it-sad horrifying account of a once dedicated disciple turned away towards darkness. Very full of feeling and description.
05/26/11
You seem to have captured the essence of Judas so well. I could see it evoving in just that way. Congratulations!
05/26/11
Very nicely done. So glad I read this. Excellent writing.