The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
A 'bravo' job on a subject that can be boring to some. You did such an intertaining and enyoyable job of storyline and important information. Good balance - good read!
10/18/05
Well written, good information. Think I will go out and look for a juicer this weekend. Thanks for posting.
I was at the end of the story before I realized it. Good info and so interestingly packaged! (Excuse the use of the word 'packaged'!)
10/19/05
This would make a good piece of advertising for a certain brand of juicer published in a health journal. Of course, it would come with appopriate pictures etc - the buyer wouldn't even realizing he was reading an advertisment! Well done - good reading and very informative.
This story caught my eye because here in Washington we call rain "liquid sunshine". :-)I enjoyed it! And thanks for the great info--I should drag my juicer back out...
10/22/05
Nice Job! Makes me want to go buy a juicer. Actually, have been wanting to do that anyway :)
10/23/05
Very good article. A healthy cure ripened on the vine by God's sunshine! Thanks for sharing.