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When I first read this, I missed "the Zebedees". I kind of liked the surprise when you got to the "Rabbi". Later, when I went back to the top, I realized what I'd missed. Interesting point of view. I enjoyed reading it.
A well written, believable perspective.
I really like this "slice of life" look into how things might have been for the Zebedee family. We talk about people who walked away from their old life to follow Jesus, without thinking about what that really meant in those days. Your dialogue and perspective was very believable too. Good job.