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Amen and Amen. I really enjoyed this piece. It almost seemed liked a chorus sang in between the verses. Because we're human it is tempting to give up but praise the Lord He has given us the promise of victory if we continue in Him. Thank you for sharing this inspirational message with us. Thank you Jesus-we are more than conquerors!
I love the encouragement here... and the rhyme!
Great poem!
05/25/11
I hope someone will put this to music - it would make a great song. I love the way you highlight the Biblical characters to enforce the message - a real inspirational poem.
05/26/11
I really liked the refrain of the poem. You really packed a lot of favorite Bible stories into 750 words.
A beautiful journey through the courageous people in the Bible.

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