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05/19/11
Well, um...gross? LOL. Interesting angle of humor to take, I was wondering if it was some mean-spirited kid stealing the dentures, how nice to know it was a dog. Quite a mystery to fit into 750 words! Thanks for sharing.
Humorous piece with a mysterious slant. I like it. I can imagine the smell, grossssss. Poor folks who had to manage opureed and thickened food for a while. :) I can relate to this piece as my mom, who suffered from a severe stroke, and went to be with the Lord mths later, was in a nursing home. In order to not get totally depressed you'd try to find some humor in daily events or when something happened unexpected. Through the tears and pain sometimes laughter was the best medicine. Thx for writing this cute story! Clever.
05/20/11
This was a whimsical take on the topic and I was entertained by your story from start to end.
05/25/11
This almost has a ring of truth about it? Very amusing reading. Well written.
05/26/11
What a fun take on a nursing care facility. I never guessed who the culprit was.