The Official Writing Challenge
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This lesson is important not just for kids to learn, but for us un-confident adults, too. It's exactly the focus of my kid's Sunday School lessons this month!! I'd like to hear how Camille helped Kate build her confidence, but otherwise this is a great story well told.
Sound advice that you have fleshed out so well. If only we could learn earlier that constantly trying to be like someone else makes one of us unnecessary.
This has wide appeal -all the way from teens to adults who can recall similar feelings of inadequacy. Well written and easy to follow.
This is a beautiful story. So many teens want to fit in and be like everyone else they often forget who they are. This is a great message.
I enjoyed the read, the story and the characterization. Excellent piece!
Here's another little "yellow bar of sunshine" :)

Great Story! I loved the two different characters and their personalities. You didn't endorse any one personality type as the best, but your entry spoke one message loud and clear--- BE YOURSELF!

Keep on Writing !