The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/11
This lesson is important not just for kids to learn, but for us un-confident adults, too. It's exactly the focus of my kid's Sunday School lessons this month!! I'd like to hear how Camille helped Kate build her confidence, but otherwise this is a great story well told.
05/14/11
Sound advice that you have fleshed out so well. If only we could learn earlier that constantly trying to be like someone else makes one of us unnecessary.
05/15/11
This has wide appeal -all the way from teens to adults who can recall similar feelings of inadequacy. Well written and easy to follow.
05/17/11
This is a beautiful story. So many teens want to fit in and be like everyone else they often forget who they are. This is a great message.
05/18/11
I enjoyed the read, the story and the characterization. Excellent piece!
05/18/11
Here's another little "yellow bar of sunshine" :)

Great Story! I loved the two different characters and their personalities. You didn't endorse any one personality type as the best, but your entry spoke one message loud and clear--- BE YOURSELF!

Keep on Writing !