The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/11
Simple and sweet. I liked it. A brief encounter and misunderstood intentions that highlight the beauty of a simply good man. One edit -He starts with "God bless you too" before she said "God bless you." Other than that I think its got a wonderful point.
05/17/11
Great use of dialogue- and a delightful, fun story.