The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
WOW! Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful memories - and the profound reflection.
WOW indeed! I was hooked immediately. Every thought and emotion is so very clear and relatable. What a wonderful way to show the love of our Father for His children. Really, this is great.
05/14/11
Beautifully capturing the innocence, curiosity and secure trust of childhood. Excellent work.
05/15/11
What a sweet memory of a loving father. I love the ending!
Congratulations on placing 9th in your level and 16th overall! This is such A beautiful piece I almost felt if I was intruding in a special parent-child memory.