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This is an intense story about such a serious problem. Many stalkers often end up comitting far more serious crimes. This is a great way to draw attention to this problem.
05/15/11
A light touch on a heavy issue.
05/16/11
This is chilling with a thought provoking twist. Has potential as a longer piece -- makes me want to "stay tuned."
05/18/11
Your compelling story points out the stalker's ability to ignore reality and believe their own lies....Daisy convinced herself that Carlos needed her. Good job! God bless!
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