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Awww, touching story. I understand the Bible to say that once angels made their choice then they no longer have free will in the way we still do this side of death, but I still like the personalities you gave the angels. I know their hearts must break over our pain, too.

I pray your guardian angel has just the right words to whisper to you today. "You are special, and have a unique role in the world that no one else can fill. You are loveable and worth Jesus' own life to redeem."
Your story is well constructed, and you have a unique perspective in the way you characterized the angels.
05/14/11
Very interesting interpretation.
With all the encouragement you spread around the Challenge, I suspect you might sometimes be drafted onto the guardian angels staffing list.
Enjoyed reading your creative story. Oh what tales the angels must have. Hope we can hear about them in heaven.
05/15/11
Great reminder about a subject we do not often hear about. I thought I detected an autobiograhical strain.

Always love it when I read something that makes me pick up my dictionary.
05/15/11
Oh, wow! This is SO good! I don't know enough angel theology to tell if it's right or wrong, but I know I liked it. :)
05/17/11
The feelings come through in your story. Well done!
05/18/11
i like this :-) it reminds me of on of the disney films as it the story of cinderella?? I can picture it now with the fairy godmothers and all with different characters and colours. A very clever use of the theme of the week maybe you could make this into an animation :-)
05/18/11
This is a beautifully told story which held my heart captive through the end and beyond.
06/06/11
Shann, I love your creativity. You've created a heart-warming, stirring story. You had me emotionally involved. Super work!
I found myself with the Angels in your story.
Thank you for such a journey.
Oh, this is so beautiful and heartfelt. I love the originality of this piece. You are very creative and I agree, you are so encouraging. What a blessing your kind words are. God bless!!
This is unique, Shann. I enjoy reading "Your Angels Watching Over Me." I love your creativity. Your words flow from the first line to the end.