The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/11
Intriguing, interesting, fascinating -- all these and more. Your descriptive detail made this come alive. I enjoyed this slice of history.
05/16/11
I love that you employed a history lesson to dramatize the working of an ebb tide. Also the way you engage the reader. The one parenthetized comment might have been added to the footnotes instead. It stopped the action for a second.
This is a thought provoking piece. I liked how it made me question who I am
05/17/11
Lovely piece, drenched with fascinating history.
05/18/11
I loved this. It created great visuals of the scenes as they unfolded. You have a gift for story-telling. Well done! God bless!